Narrative Assignment
Red Pearls
Once upon a time,
there lived a boy named Avicena; he had a nice character, handsome face, and
good attitude, he was 17th years old. He is an orphan; his mother passed away
when gave a birth of him. So, he maintained by his father. His name is Oriza
sativa, some of people called him Mr. Padi. He was very loving his son, he will
sacrifice anything and do the best, and they lived with an adorable unicorn
named Horsy, a couple cute cats name Fluffy and Gamash. They lived one house
with Avicena and his father. They house has luxury architecture but still
simple, it has a lot of sun flowers, a high gate it protected by two male
gorgeous golden retriever dogs name Brova and Bravani. They lived in Namida
Island, the people was friendly and helpful. The place was tiny and close with
beautiful beach, the people from another island amazed of it, because the beach
has unique, it has shocking pink sand, clear water, sometimes it turned to be
dark blue, blue sky, and combine both of it. The amazing thing was Aurora
Borealis often came there in the night from 10.00 pm until 3.00 am, although
was not close to the North Pole, it very fascinating. And there, the beach has
calm weave. He has favorite place there, in the bench beside coconut tree, the
age more than 100 years; people called it the endless tree.
Every morning he
always comes to the beach with his unicorn, and sat there. he smile and said
“How beautiful this place, Thank you God, for all this favors which countless,
I never bored for always thankful of You”, and then, he close his eyes and
the reflection appear suddenly, he shock and look around, it just for made sure
that is it real or his delusion. He asks to his unicorn, although he knows that
he never give an answer by it “what’s going on, Horsy that reflection often
appears in my mind, lately”. He looks shock and tried for calm. Then, he decide
for go home, he greet his two male gorgeous golden retriever dogs, they
sticking the tongue out, and they eyes so cute. He greet the two cats while
they playing in the behind home. His father came and said “what happen, my
son, you look afraid”. “Dad, I often see the reflection, it feel freak, because
I never experience this thing” said Avicena. “Really?, tell me, Son”, “I see a
lot of white pearl on the sand, some of them shine with shocking red light, and
then beautiful girl appear from there, she knows my name, Dad”. His father
replied “I know it will happen”, “what do you mean, Dad” said Avicena. “Pass
time, your grand father ever told me, that the one my son will to be protector
of this island”, after he heard that he still did not understand. “this island
has rare red pearl, it has magic power, if the wrong person uses it, it will be
danger, they will use it for reserve devil ghost, and they will
make black world and the girl whom you see is your partner for protect this
island, her called Abeup, her name is Yoppo, her age same with you”. “Wow I
feel like super hero, Dad” said Avicena. “Yes, you are”. “Where she comes from?”
said Avicena. His father told that the girl comes from Namida Island to, but
she from other dimension, it just certain people who can see, she is kind and
has special magic. Actually, he still does not believe that he is the protector
of his island, and about the girl, magic pearl, devil ghost, he doubt about it,
it heard irrational.
In the next day,
he comes to the beach without his unicorn, he sat in the bench, and he saw a
group of flamingos around there. He still confused with the previous incident.
Suddenly, there was someone who patted his shoulders, he shock, and the girl
appear and greet him, she has long wavy hair, pink eyes lens, and bright skin.
She introduced her self to him, and said “Wow, is it a dream?” the girl replied
“No, this is real. I believe that you never experience this before, but can I
to be your nice partner?” He agrees with her and his expression look more relax
than before. They felt comfort each others. The girl name Yoppo told that the
greedy people who reserve devil ghost will steal the red pearl in the night
without aurora borealis. He said “really? I think it comes every night here, I
don’t know about you talk it before”. She explains that it will come two month
later, when the weather changes unfriendly. Yoppo said “You have something
special, Avicena”. He still confused what her mean. “You have a sign in your
shoulder same like me the color is bright orange”. He replied “Yes, I think is
such as tattoo, so what function of this?” She tells if two sign combine, it
will protect this island from people who reserve devil ghost, she said “pass
time, your grand parents do the same”. He just silent and pay attention. When
the day comes they have to come in the center of the beach in the middle night,
no matter what they must to do it.
The day come, since the morning, the sky so cloudy, the sun did not appear, the animals felt
scared, the wolf howling around. People safe their self in their home.
Suddenly, the door knocked, he curious and open it, and then, everything
turning black. He wakes up in foreign place there was so disgusting, wet, rancid
blood smell. His hands and feet tied in front of the pole. Then, someone
appeared from the dark and said “How are you, Boy? Is it a pleasant place? ”.
Avicena did not want answer it, he observe who is the one who spoke in front of
him. The one walked closer. He appearance was so scary with long black cloak and
faceless, when it closer there was more odor. He felt so weak, he asked to him
self is it the devil ghost? In the different place Yoppo experience the same,
but she has magic power, so she could run away with easy and little sweat.
In the same time,
his father was panic, he did not found his son every where. His two dogs come
to him, and gave signal for follow them, he called all his waiters for help
him. The two dogs run to the forest until the downstream of the river, he sure
this place the devil ghost kingdom, but it invisible. Than, he remembered that
he has a key which can opened the other dimension. His father come in, he
command all of his waiters for don’t followed him.
They successful
ran away from the kingdom devil ghost, they immediately came to the beach. They
look so luck, Yoppo was stay there. but unfortunately, the devotees of the
devil ghost appear from every where, they tried for blocking the way of combine
two signs, they came from the water, the devotees scared of the sand, and they have do
combine two sign in the center beach. His father said "You guys have to it in the center beach, hurry up, I prepared a boat there".
Then, Yoppo has an idea for throw them with sand. So, Avicena, his father, and his
waiters do the same, and the devotees of the ghost devil lost and burn. They
quick for combine two sign, the bright light orange light shining this place,
and the aurora borealis came again, and no one who stole the red pearls
anymore. Finally, the situation was better. And they live happily.
By Naqyan Diwanal Khotoya (0916011711), Class: PBI IIA pagi
Oh, this is a really good story!!
BalasHapuskeep writing!!
i'm so curious, what happen with yoppo and avicena after the incident? do they will get married and life happily ever after?
BalasHapusNice story.....Yoppo in korean language is beautiful ��
BalasHapus