Narrative Assignment





 Red Pearls
 
Once upon a time, there lived a boy named Avicena; he had a nice character, handsome face, and good attitude, he was 17th years old. He is an orphan; his mother passed away when gave a birth of him. So, he maintained by his father. His name is Oriza sativa, some of people called him Mr. Padi. He was very loving his son, he will sacrifice anything and do the best, and they lived with an adorable unicorn named Horsy, a couple cute cats name Fluffy and Gamash. They lived one house with Avicena and his father. They house has luxury architecture but still simple, it has a lot of sun flowers, a high gate it protected by two male gorgeous golden retriever dogs name Brova and Bravani. They lived in Namida Island, the people was friendly and helpful. The place was tiny and close with beautiful beach, the people from another island amazed of it, because the beach has unique, it has shocking pink sand, clear water, sometimes it turned to be dark blue, blue sky, and combine both of it. The amazing thing was Aurora Borealis often came there in the night from 10.00 pm until 3.00 am, although was not close to the North Pole, it very fascinating. And there, the beach has calm weave. He has favorite place there, in the bench beside coconut tree, the age more than 100 years; people called it the endless tree.
Every morning he always comes to the beach with his unicorn, and sat there. he smile and said  “How beautiful this place, Thank you God, for all this favors which countless, I never bored for always thankful of You”, and then, he close his eyes and the reflection appear suddenly, he shock and look around, it just for made sure that is it real or his delusion. He asks to his unicorn, although he knows that he never give an answer by it “what’s going on, Horsy that reflection often appears in my mind, lately”. He looks shock and tried for calm. Then, he decide for go home, he greet his two male gorgeous golden retriever dogs, they sticking the tongue out, and they eyes so cute. He greet the two cats while they playing in the behind home. His father came and said “what happen, my son, you look afraid”. “Dad, I often see the reflection, it feel freak, because I never experience this thing” said Avicena. “Really?, tell me, Son”, “I see a lot of white pearl on the sand, some of them shine with shocking red light, and then beautiful girl appear from there, she knows my name, Dad”. His father replied “I know it will happen”, “what do you mean, Dad” said Avicena. “Pass time, your grand father ever told me, that the one my son will to be protector of this island”, after he heard that he still did not understand. “this island has rare red pearl, it has magic power, if the wrong person uses it, it will be danger, they will use it for reserve devil ghost, and they will make black world and the girl whom you see is your partner for protect this island, her called Abeup, her name is Yoppo, her age same with you”. “Wow I feel like super hero, Dad” said Avicena. “Yes, you are”. “Where she comes from?” said Avicena. His father told that the girl comes from Namida Island to, but she from other dimension, it just certain people who can see, she is kind and has special magic. Actually, he still does not believe that he is the protector of his island, and about the girl, magic pearl, devil ghost, he doubt about it, it heard irrational.
In the next day, he comes to the beach without his unicorn, he sat in the bench, and he saw a group of flamingos around there. He still confused with the previous incident. Suddenly, there was someone who patted his shoulders, he shock, and the girl appear and greet him, she has long wavy hair, pink eyes lens, and bright skin. She introduced her self to him, and said “Wow, is it a dream?” the girl replied “No, this is real. I believe that you never experience this before, but can I to be your nice partner?” He agrees with her and his expression look more relax than before. They felt comfort each others. The girl name Yoppo told that the greedy people who reserve devil ghost will steal the red pearl in the night without aurora borealis. He said “really? I think it comes every night here, I don’t know about you talk it before”. She explains that it will come two month later, when the weather changes unfriendly. Yoppo said “You have something special, Avicena”. He still confused what her mean. “You have a sign in your shoulder same like me the color is bright orange”. He replied “Yes, I think is such as tattoo, so what function of this?” She tells if two sign combine, it will protect this island from people who reserve devil ghost, she said “pass time, your grand parents do the same”. He just silent and pay attention. When the day comes they have to come in the center of the beach in the middle night, no matter what they must to do it.
The day come, since the morning, the sky so cloudy, the sun did not appear, the animals felt scared, the wolf howling around. People safe their self in their home. Suddenly, the door knocked, he curious and open it, and then, everything turning black. He wakes up in foreign place there was so disgusting, wet, rancid blood smell. His hands and feet tied in front of the pole. Then, someone appeared from the dark and said “How are you, Boy? Is it a pleasant place? ”. Avicena did not want answer it, he observe who is the one who spoke in front of him. The one walked closer. He appearance was so scary with long black cloak and faceless, when it closer there was more odor. He felt so weak, he asked to him self is it the devil ghost? In the different place Yoppo experience the same, but she has magic power, so she could run away with easy and little sweat.
In the same time, his father was panic, he did not found his son every where. His two dogs come to him, and gave signal for follow them, he called all his waiters for help him. The two dogs run to the forest until the downstream of the river, he sure this place the devil ghost kingdom, but it invisible. Than, he remembered that he has a key which can opened the other dimension. His father come in, he command all of his waiters for don’t followed him.
They successful ran away from the kingdom devil ghost, they immediately came to the beach. They look so luck, Yoppo was stay there. but unfortunately, the devotees of the devil ghost appear from every where, they tried for blocking the way of combine two signs, they came from the water, the devotees scared of the sand, and they have do combine two sign in the center beach. His father said "You guys have to it in the center beach, hurry up, I prepared a boat there". Then, Yoppo has an idea for throw them with sand. So,  Avicena, his father, and his waiters do the same, and the devotees of the ghost devil lost and burn. They quick for combine two sign, the bright light orange light shining this place, and the aurora borealis came again, and no one who stole the red pearls anymore. Finally, the situation was better. And they live happily.


By Naqyan Diwanal Khotoya (0916011711), Class: PBI IIA pagi

Komentar

  1. Oh, this is a really good story!!
    keep writing!!

    BalasHapus
  2. i'm so curious, what happen with yoppo and avicena after the incident? do they will get married and life happily ever after?

    BalasHapus
  3. Nice story.....Yoppo in korean language is beautiful ��

    BalasHapus

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